2010年9月26日 星期日

BBQ

This Wednesday our class decided to BBQ, but I was got sick, so I didn't come to BBQ.
But this weekend I came to K.H. I am BBQ with my friends.
We ate a lots of food, and we chated all night.
I think it is a beautiful day. I am so happy with my friends!!!

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  1. Hi, Kelly:
    I am sorry to hear that you were sick and couldn't attend the BBQ you classmates had. Two suggestions for your blog. First, it is too short. I am expecting a little big longer blog. Second, you should have paid more attention to your spelling and grammar when you write your blogs. If you are not sure the spelling or usage, try to use the free online ESL dictionaries that I recommended. For example, 'I am BBQ with my friends.' is not an English sentence. 'chated' is not an English word.

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